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Alright, so I'll decide to make another~ topic.
This is about fan fiction this time, for Angel Beats, however, if you want any other series, I'll try and find them and post them here along with where I got it from. They will mainly be from fanfiction.net
I will make my own fan-fiction, although most ideas are dried up already and key revelations have already been used many times, but I have a nice idea, remember, if you like the fictions, click on the original link and write a review supporting the writer!
This is about fan fiction this time, for Angel Beats, however, if you want any other series, I'll try and find them and post them here along with where I got it from. They will mainly be from fanfiction.net
I will make my own fan-fiction, although most ideas are dried up already and key revelations have already been used many times, but I have a nice idea, remember, if you like the fictions, click on the original link and write a review supporting the writer!
A true fan makes a fan fiction about something they love.
Where to start.
Where to start.
First one!
This is titled "Angel Beats: The Other Half"
A brilliant short fan-fiction in my eyes, the writer described everything perfectly with enough detail to make you think and imagine what's happening, even if you're skimming, but not too much that it takes two lines to explain that somebody is running. This fanfiction focuses on a possible extended ending of episode 12, with Kanade & Yuzuru, however, adding a slight twist as who Yuzuru is. Original link.
A brilliant short fan-fiction in my eyes, the writer described everything perfectly with enough detail to make you think and imagine what's happening, even if you're skimming, but not too much that it takes two lines to explain that somebody is running. This fanfiction focuses on a possible extended ending of episode 12, with Kanade & Yuzuru, however, adding a slight twist as who Yuzuru is. Original link.
Spoiler
Story updated on: - 28/07/2010
Chapter beta read by: akiqueen
Declaration of the story to all readers
Information provided in this story does not tell the real outcome of the main story or impose the change either; it is just fan-fiction for fun. Technical terms and ideas may not follow the same principal of the TV series and some differences may arise.
This story does not infringe the rights of the real actors or any member of the staff that produced the show and neither does it infringe copyright. By reading the text you take full responsibility of your actions, and the author of the story has no liability of damage or problems with person or persons involved.
This Fan Fiction is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places and incidents are either a product of the author's imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual people, living or dead, or events is entirely coincidental.
Copyright Info
All I'm saying is, if you like the story and want to copy it, then you are free to do so, if by some flick someone decides to use the idea for a TV Episode or anime (Wishful thinking, but it must be covered) all that I ask is that I be informed by E-mail.
You can do what you want with this story: copy it, ship it, print it in a book or use parts of it; hell, send it to the other end of the world. I do not mind; just make sure you place credit where credit is due.
Note From The Author (Shane Ward):
I was touched dramatically by the ending of the Anime series Angel Beats and I decided to continue where it left off. The ending had one major question that has left me stumped for days. How could "Yuzuru Otonashi" be alive since the girl, Angel, has his heart? Then I had a revelation. An idea. Hope it pans out in the story.
This is a first person view story and an experiment that I am trying out, please let me know what you think about the format of the story, go crazy, I do not mind.
This is a ONESHOT story and depending on the reviews I might make a continuation. Have fun and enjoy.
Please note that some aspects of this story will be out of mind and not follow the normal steps of a story. Also, some parts of this story might be hard to swallow. But please continue with it.
Angel Beats: The Other Half
I wasn't sure on the time, or particularly interested in the condition of the day, either. All I was interested in was going home from another dreary day at school.
People streamed through the streets, going about their everyday lives. So basic and so pathetic, but I'm one of them, like animals in the forest, so poetic.
I wasn't interested in stopping for a bite to eat or running franticly to the nearest train. My heart ached and to top of my already imperfect day, someone stumbled into my break time to give me information that struck me like a hammer blow. How could something like this happen? Now I'm alone in this family.
It was an honorable thing he did. In his last dying breaths, he filled in his donor card and saved countless lives. I would have done the same.
But my attention was drawing to a familiar tune that often haunted my dreams, a familiar force that stopped me dead in my tracks.
I passed a girl. Now that I come to think about it, that girl in my peripheral vision was someone I recognized. A feeling of absolute certainty. I'm unable to understand where it came from, but it's there. My nagging feelings are telling me to look.
I turned and saw the girl leaning on the wall. She walked away, humming that song. The song that came from deep within my heart… just what was it? Not only that, I knew this girl, I was certain of it.
She walked away and at that precise moment I decided to take a leap of faith. I leapt forward with wide eyes, ready for her look.
Finally, I manage to touch her shoulder and get her attention. Then she turned around, her humming suddenly stopped by my touch.
I will never forget the shocked and surprised look she gave me. From that split second of eye contact, I saw emptiness and despair. When this silver-haired beauty looked into my eyes, she saw something.
I can't be sure, but emotions that were buried deep within me lit like wildfire. There was something hidden, something that connected me with her, a strong sadness and something from the other side.
Her face lit up like a coronation day firework show; she was full of colors and life, she seemed to recognize me, but I swear, I had never seen this girl before.
Suddenly, she grabbed hold of me and then said the very words that shook the foundations that I stood on.
"Yuzuru, you're alive!"
Confused, all I could think about at this moment was that 'Yuzuru' was not my name. Before I could interject, she continued.
"But how is this possible? Your heart is inside me; you died."
Then it struck me: I had no choice and I needed to get the record straight. I pulled her back. Her eyes were full of tears and I could clearly see love in her soul.
I break the news, news that will certainly upset her. "I'm not Yuzuru. My name is Hazuru Otonashi."
She looked at me with shock, clearly unable to make the connection. My feelings were strange. I knew this girl, but I didn't know her. Finally, I decide to reveal the truth. She deserves to know.
"Yuzuru is my twin brother. I know about his death..." Again I pause, and the news suddenly sinks in. How does she know about the transplant, my brother's heart?
Then my own heart tells me: I have a bond with this girl, like my brother beforehand.
I must confirm this. "You... have Yuzuru's heart inside you."
She placed her hands on her chest. The bustle of people walked around us, oblivious to the huge revelations that were taking place.
"Your brother saved my life. He also helped me out of the dream world."
She removed her hat and all was soon revealed. Her silver hair, which was bunched up inside the hat, flowed down. Her white dress added to the final image; I definitely knew this girl.
She has now caught my attention. A dream world, she's seen him before… What the hell is going on?
"You're Yuzuru's brother. You look just like him," she shed more tears.
Poor girl, it was obvious that she had been in a close relationship with my brother, but I know he died.
What was this dream world she spoke off?
I had to know, my heart thumped even harder now. I could feel it trying to leap from my chest. "My brother, you've seen him in this dream world? Tell me. " I grab her shoulders. "How is he?"
She looked down, tears formed on her face and dropped to the paved floor. Poor girl, what did I ask her to do?
"I don't know. The last I remember, he held me, begged me to stay. But after I finally thanked him for giving me a second chance at life, I returned to this world."
I still didn't understand what she was saying. Other worlds and a chance at life. But my heart knew this girl. The close interaction my brother had with her had now sunk into me, me!
"It must be hard for you," I said to her, and made my way towards the railing of the bridge. The water that flowed beneath us was as clear as the blue sky. The weather was perfect too.
How we came here was another question. I guessed we walked along the path, completely immersed in our conversation. This girl was special; I could feel why my brother was attracted to her.
Before she had the chance to speak I felt something, a word. A word I must check out. "I feel others call you Angel."
She looked at me in shock. Could she be surprised that I know something about Angel? The battles, the other realm. Her eyes appeared stunned and her sudden body language indicated that she didn't expect that kind of word.
"Angel. Yes, that was me in the afterlife." I smile; the pieces began to fall into place. This girl was interesting. Yes, very interesting. I decided to ask her if she wanted something to eat. I had a craving for a dish, mapo doufu. I had no recollection of when I desired a taste for this dish, but it happened recently.
I think her name is Kanade Tachibana, so I call her by her name. The silver-haired beauty gave a small jolt. She was also surprised I knew her name… I asked her for the date. Well, not a date, a peaceful place to talk. That should be okay.
She nodded, giving her consent. We walked to a peaceful place and talked about the strange link and the strange high school that acted as a Purgatory. Such revealing revelations and a lot to catch up on. Especially about my brother, Yuzuru.
Chapter beta read by: akiqueen
Declaration of the story to all readers
Information provided in this story does not tell the real outcome of the main story or impose the change either; it is just fan-fiction for fun. Technical terms and ideas may not follow the same principal of the TV series and some differences may arise.
This story does not infringe the rights of the real actors or any member of the staff that produced the show and neither does it infringe copyright. By reading the text you take full responsibility of your actions, and the author of the story has no liability of damage or problems with person or persons involved.
This Fan Fiction is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places and incidents are either a product of the author's imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual people, living or dead, or events is entirely coincidental.
Copyright Info
All I'm saying is, if you like the story and want to copy it, then you are free to do so, if by some flick someone decides to use the idea for a TV Episode or anime (Wishful thinking, but it must be covered) all that I ask is that I be informed by E-mail.
You can do what you want with this story: copy it, ship it, print it in a book or use parts of it; hell, send it to the other end of the world. I do not mind; just make sure you place credit where credit is due.
Note From The Author (Shane Ward):
I was touched dramatically by the ending of the Anime series Angel Beats and I decided to continue where it left off. The ending had one major question that has left me stumped for days. How could "Yuzuru Otonashi" be alive since the girl, Angel, has his heart? Then I had a revelation. An idea. Hope it pans out in the story.
This is a first person view story and an experiment that I am trying out, please let me know what you think about the format of the story, go crazy, I do not mind.
This is a ONESHOT story and depending on the reviews I might make a continuation. Have fun and enjoy.
Please note that some aspects of this story will be out of mind and not follow the normal steps of a story. Also, some parts of this story might be hard to swallow. But please continue with it.
Angel Beats: The Other Half
I wasn't sure on the time, or particularly interested in the condition of the day, either. All I was interested in was going home from another dreary day at school.
People streamed through the streets, going about their everyday lives. So basic and so pathetic, but I'm one of them, like animals in the forest, so poetic.
I wasn't interested in stopping for a bite to eat or running franticly to the nearest train. My heart ached and to top of my already imperfect day, someone stumbled into my break time to give me information that struck me like a hammer blow. How could something like this happen? Now I'm alone in this family.
It was an honorable thing he did. In his last dying breaths, he filled in his donor card and saved countless lives. I would have done the same.
But my attention was drawing to a familiar tune that often haunted my dreams, a familiar force that stopped me dead in my tracks.
I passed a girl. Now that I come to think about it, that girl in my peripheral vision was someone I recognized. A feeling of absolute certainty. I'm unable to understand where it came from, but it's there. My nagging feelings are telling me to look.
I turned and saw the girl leaning on the wall. She walked away, humming that song. The song that came from deep within my heart… just what was it? Not only that, I knew this girl, I was certain of it.
She walked away and at that precise moment I decided to take a leap of faith. I leapt forward with wide eyes, ready for her look.
Finally, I manage to touch her shoulder and get her attention. Then she turned around, her humming suddenly stopped by my touch.
I will never forget the shocked and surprised look she gave me. From that split second of eye contact, I saw emptiness and despair. When this silver-haired beauty looked into my eyes, she saw something.
I can't be sure, but emotions that were buried deep within me lit like wildfire. There was something hidden, something that connected me with her, a strong sadness and something from the other side.
Her face lit up like a coronation day firework show; she was full of colors and life, she seemed to recognize me, but I swear, I had never seen this girl before.
Suddenly, she grabbed hold of me and then said the very words that shook the foundations that I stood on.
"Yuzuru, you're alive!"
Confused, all I could think about at this moment was that 'Yuzuru' was not my name. Before I could interject, she continued.
"But how is this possible? Your heart is inside me; you died."
Then it struck me: I had no choice and I needed to get the record straight. I pulled her back. Her eyes were full of tears and I could clearly see love in her soul.
I break the news, news that will certainly upset her. "I'm not Yuzuru. My name is Hazuru Otonashi."
She looked at me with shock, clearly unable to make the connection. My feelings were strange. I knew this girl, but I didn't know her. Finally, I decide to reveal the truth. She deserves to know.
"Yuzuru is my twin brother. I know about his death..." Again I pause, and the news suddenly sinks in. How does she know about the transplant, my brother's heart?
Then my own heart tells me: I have a bond with this girl, like my brother beforehand.
I must confirm this. "You... have Yuzuru's heart inside you."
She placed her hands on her chest. The bustle of people walked around us, oblivious to the huge revelations that were taking place.
"Your brother saved my life. He also helped me out of the dream world."
She removed her hat and all was soon revealed. Her silver hair, which was bunched up inside the hat, flowed down. Her white dress added to the final image; I definitely knew this girl.
She has now caught my attention. A dream world, she's seen him before… What the hell is going on?
"You're Yuzuru's brother. You look just like him," she shed more tears.
Poor girl, it was obvious that she had been in a close relationship with my brother, but I know he died.
What was this dream world she spoke off?
I had to know, my heart thumped even harder now. I could feel it trying to leap from my chest. "My brother, you've seen him in this dream world? Tell me. " I grab her shoulders. "How is he?"
She looked down, tears formed on her face and dropped to the paved floor. Poor girl, what did I ask her to do?
"I don't know. The last I remember, he held me, begged me to stay. But after I finally thanked him for giving me a second chance at life, I returned to this world."
I still didn't understand what she was saying. Other worlds and a chance at life. But my heart knew this girl. The close interaction my brother had with her had now sunk into me, me!
"It must be hard for you," I said to her, and made my way towards the railing of the bridge. The water that flowed beneath us was as clear as the blue sky. The weather was perfect too.
How we came here was another question. I guessed we walked along the path, completely immersed in our conversation. This girl was special; I could feel why my brother was attracted to her.
Before she had the chance to speak I felt something, a word. A word I must check out. "I feel others call you Angel."
She looked at me in shock. Could she be surprised that I know something about Angel? The battles, the other realm. Her eyes appeared stunned and her sudden body language indicated that she didn't expect that kind of word.
"Angel. Yes, that was me in the afterlife." I smile; the pieces began to fall into place. This girl was interesting. Yes, very interesting. I decided to ask her if she wanted something to eat. I had a craving for a dish, mapo doufu. I had no recollection of when I desired a taste for this dish, but it happened recently.
I think her name is Kanade Tachibana, so I call her by her name. The silver-haired beauty gave a small jolt. She was also surprised I knew her name… I asked her for the date. Well, not a date, a peaceful place to talk. That should be okay.
She nodded, giving her consent. We walked to a peaceful place and talked about the strange link and the strange high school that acted as a Purgatory. Such revealing revelations and a lot to catch up on. Especially about my brother, Yuzuru.
Second one!
This is titled "Reuniting the SSS, an Angel Beats fanfiction"
A nice fanfiction for the YuixHinata pairing. A small bit of comedy and a decent storyline. You'll probably enjoy it if you enjoyed the last. It includes other SSS members, mainly Noda and Yurippe. Original link.
A nice fanfiction for the YuixHinata pairing. A small bit of comedy and a decent storyline. You'll probably enjoy it if you enjoyed the last. It includes other SSS members, mainly Noda and Yurippe. Original link.
Spoiler
01: The encounter
"I'm home..." I said to myself as I walked into my apartment.
I put away my baseball gear and changed into my PJs. Then I laid on my bed and closed my eyes for a minute.
I imagined a cute idiot that I remembered doing something annoying...
'Yui Nyan~!'
"Ah...I gotta stop remembering her doing those annoying things..." I said to myself. But I really missed that stuff...
I paused in thought and looked back to when I was in the afterlife.
Yurippe, Otonashi, Oyama, all the other SSS members...
...and Yui.
It has been 3 years...and I still haven't found her...
I promised that I would find her...
But no matter how many windows I break, it's never her window.
The police are, at some point, going to see me breaking some one's window on purpose and then I'll ave to pay them lots of money for doing something so stupid.
Am I not looking in the right area? Where is she?
"I have to find her...I have...to..." I mumbled to myself and fell asleep.
...
"Hinata-kun! Hinata-kun! Wake up you idiot!" said a voice I remembered very well.
"Uhwaa...5 more minutes mom..." I replied in a daze from waking up.
"I'm not your mother, moron! Now wake up or we'll both die!" she yelled.
"I don't wanna die again...mom..." I said, still a bit dazed.
The girl pulled (more like yanked) me out of bed and into the bathroom.
"WAKE UP!" she said and got my face wet.
I instantly reacted and pulled my self away from the water.
"Bwaa! Wha-what was that for-?" I said looking to the girl next to me.
"YURIPPE?"
"Good. Your awake. C'mon we gotta get going, or we'll both die!" she said and grabbed me by the wrist and started pulling me out and down the hall and stairs of the hotel.
Stuff was starting to blow up from behind us, and that made me run on my own.
"What's going on Yurippe? And how did you find me?" I asked, gasping for breath now since I hadn't ran for my life in a long time.
"I'll explain once we get to a safe spot! Until then, keep running!" she said and ran a bit faster while not looking back.
"I wish I knew WHAT we were running from!-WHOA!" I said, just dodging a piece of concrete that was flung toward us. We were running down the street now. I wonder why no one else is awake yet?...
"It's probably the devil himself!" answered Yurippe.
"WHAT?" I yelled and looked behind us.
Now I don't know what the devil looks like...but I'm pretty sure he looks something like what I saw.
The darkest black scaly skin, and the bloodiest red eyes. Any hair that was on that thing looked like you could jump in and never be seen again. It has large thorns on it's head, fingers, and feet. Fire was coming from his nose and pitch black smoke from his mouth. All the smoke had made the sky as dark as it probably ever would've been.
"Whoa!" I said in awe. The "devil" was only like 2 miles away from us. He took looong footsteps that left footprints everywhere he was. He was a GIANT!
"Yeah, this is pretty intense. We need to get out of view before it trys to grab us or something!" said Yurippe was was looking around for a good hiding place.
"Hide? Don't you have a gun?"
"No. That was in the afterlife 3 years ago, idiot!" was her reply
"Oh right..." I said feeling a bit stupid.
We kept running and running, we both looked very tired by now.
Suddenly as we were passing by a dump, we were pulled inside!
"Wha-! OUCH THAT HURTS!" I yelled at the person who pulled us roughly into the trash. I couldn't tell who it was though.
"Ow!...Huh? Chaa?" said Yurippe, who somehow got pulled on top of me. If Noda saw this he would freak.
Haha! I miss those days...
Great, now I sound like a grandpa.
"Wait, Chaa? Where?" I asked. I couldn't see much since Yurippe was on top of me.
"Right there you idiot-!" she said looking down at me, then her cheeks turned pink as she realized why I couldn't see. Now we were only about an inch away from our noses touching.
"Yurippe, I obviously can't see a thing from down here." I said bluntly.
She was silent for a minute, and then she punched me.
"Idiot." she growled and got off and went to the right.
"Hahaha! You guys are as funny together as you used to be!" said a voice that I also remembered.
And I quite agree with him.
I got up and looked behind me and saw an old face. It was Chaa!
"Chaa! I didn't know you lived at a dump!" I said sarcastically.
"Haha, no I'm just here for hiding...and waiting..." he replied, his arms crossed and himself settled on a broken old couch.
"For what?" asked Yurippe.
"Not what, who. I was waiting for any SSS members to show up. I've already found three. Two of them I sent somewhere else along with some weapons a bullets." explained Chaa.
"Who were they?" I asked, standing fully up now.
"Otonashi and Kanade, I sent those two together into my new hide out, and then Noda, and he said he wanted to help me grab anymore members that came along." he answered.
That's our Noda alright.
"Huh? Noda-kun is here too?" asked Yurippe.
"Why yes, he is. He grabbed and flung you two to my feet! Haha!" said Chaa with a hearty laugh.
Me and Yurippe both looked behind us slowly and saw Noda standing right behind us.
"Uh oh..." I mumbled. He looked pissed off...AT ME. I know this because he was glaring at me.
"Noda-kun!" said Yurippe while taking his hand, "It's good to see you again!" she smiled kindly, making Noda go instantly cherry red.
"N-nice t-to see you again t-too, Yurippe!" he said, quickly getting over his anger at me.
"Sooo..." I said and looked back at Chaa.
"Yes?" he asked.
"How are SSS members that can't move...going to be safe?" I asked.
"They won't. Unless we find them on our own...I don't think we can get them if we just sit around." he explained.
I was stunned and silent.
"Is there a certain someone that you want safe?" he asked.
I gave no answer.
"If you know where they are, I suggest to go and get them before it's too late, Hinata." he said and then sighed after a minute I still hadn't responded.
"So you don't know where they are?" he asked. This time I shook my head, while giving a look of sadness.
"It might already be...too late..." I said in almost a whisper.
"I'm sorry, Hinata...but there's nothing we can do." said Chaa and got up.
The devil thing was getting closer, Chaa gave me and Yurippe both weapons, plus bullets, and then he took me and Yurippe to a man hole.
"Go down here and then you'll find Otonashi and Kanade." he said and took the lid off of the man hole.
Just is the smallest sound that would've never been heard...
I heard a scream.
It was a girl...
Could it be?...
"What was that scream?" asked Yurippe looking around. It must have been louder then I thought.
"I don't...know...it sounded like..." I said slowly and looked around. It was coming from a house that was very close to the devils feet, which was only a little ways away.
"Yurippe...should we check it out?" I asked and looked at her, I think I had a worried expression on because once she looked at me to give an answer, she pauses while staring at me.
"...Fine. Let's go, Hinata-kun." she said finally and we both left for the house.
On the way I saw a base ball on the ground and I picked it up, then threw it at the front window of the house, just in case...
"What was THATfor?" asked Yurippe as we ran for the house.
"Longstory Yurippe. I'll tell ya later!" I said and ran on ahead. Yurippe was still tired from running so much last time.
I got into the house somehow and landed hard onto the ground.
"Owww..." I groaned.
"Wh-who's there?" asked a voice that I now recognized.
I looked up quickly and saw a cute girl, with pink long hair and pretty pink eyes.
It was...
"YUI?" I said, shocked that I really found her.
"Huh?..." she said and squinted her eyes a bit to see better.
"SEMPAI?" said Yui, also shocked now that she knew who I was.
"Yeah! It's me!"
"It took you long enough!" she complained
"Haha, we'll talk about that later. In te mean time, we gotta get outta here!" I said and got up and ran to her side.
"But I can't move or anything-!" she protested and then I picked her up and carried her like she was a princess.
"Don't worry, I'll carry you." I said charmingly enough to get her to blush.
"HURRY UP IN THERE HINATA-KUN!" yelled Yurippe from outside, ruining our moment. I don't think she could see in through the window though since it was so dark.
"I'M COMING! JEEZ!" I yelled back then looked back to Yui. "Hold on tight, OK?"
"Sempai."
"Call me Hinata."
"Fine. Hinata-sempai."
"Yes?"
"I can't grip, hold on, you get it?"
"OH RIGHT. Sorry..."
And then I left out the window and began running for my life with Yurippe again for the third time. I gripped tightly to Yui so she wouldn't fall out of my arms.
After dodging a lot of things thrown at us, we finally made it back and went down the man hole.
"EEEEWWWW! It's stinky down here!" yelled Yui who, probably at this moment, REALLY wanted to plug her nose.
"Yeah it is..." I said, starting to cough a little.
"Hinata? Yui?"
said a voice from not too far away.
"It sounds like them..." said another voice.
"Yeah it does...but how would Yui get here if she's paralyzed?" wondered out loud the first voice again.
"Otonashi? Kanade too?" asked Yurippe and then we found ourselvesin a lit area with Otonashi and Kanade sitting down on a pipe.
"Eh? Yurippe too?" said Otonashi. Kanade ran over to Yurippe and gave her a hug.
"Uh..yeah...good to see you too.." said Yurippe while hugging Kanade back.
"Ah...so Hinata is carrying Yui..." said Otonashi now looking at me carrying the little girl in pajamas.
Well actually we're ALL in our pajamas. This is SO funny, you should've seen Noda's!
Once I laid Yui down I sat next to her while holding her hand. Then we all told our stories about what we started doing once we had gotten out of the afterlife 3 years ago.
"YOU LOOKED FOR YUI FOR 3 YEARS, HINATA?" yelled Otonashi.
"That's mean Otonashi...your making it sound like I'm crazy!" I said with a funny pout.
"Yeah but...I would think you'd find her sooner then that..."
"DO YOU KNOW HOW MANY WINDOWS I BROKE EVERYDAY?"
"OK OK...never mind." said Otonashi backing down. I bet I looked like a mad man now.
Yuibluntly said she laid in bed watching a lot of TV for 3 years. Yuri said she got a job at a book store and saved up for a very cool gun. Now she's just saving up for it's very cool bullets. Look at who's crazy, Otonashi.
Otonashi said he finished collage and, after finding her, started dating Kanade. Kanade only said she spent 3 good years with Yuzuru.
"Yuzuru?"
"That's his first name, not his last which is Otonashi." she replied.
"Oh...OK."
And so we sat down there for awhile, just talking.
"I'm home..." I said to myself as I walked into my apartment.
I put away my baseball gear and changed into my PJs. Then I laid on my bed and closed my eyes for a minute.
I imagined a cute idiot that I remembered doing something annoying...
'Yui Nyan~!'
"Ah...I gotta stop remembering her doing those annoying things..." I said to myself. But I really missed that stuff...
I paused in thought and looked back to when I was in the afterlife.
Yurippe, Otonashi, Oyama, all the other SSS members...
...and Yui.
It has been 3 years...and I still haven't found her...
I promised that I would find her...
But no matter how many windows I break, it's never her window.
The police are, at some point, going to see me breaking some one's window on purpose and then I'll ave to pay them lots of money for doing something so stupid.
Am I not looking in the right area? Where is she?
"I have to find her...I have...to..." I mumbled to myself and fell asleep.
...
"Hinata-kun! Hinata-kun! Wake up you idiot!" said a voice I remembered very well.
"Uhwaa...5 more minutes mom..." I replied in a daze from waking up.
"I'm not your mother, moron! Now wake up or we'll both die!" she yelled.
"I don't wanna die again...mom..." I said, still a bit dazed.
The girl pulled (more like yanked) me out of bed and into the bathroom.
"WAKE UP!" she said and got my face wet.
I instantly reacted and pulled my self away from the water.
"Bwaa! Wha-what was that for-?" I said looking to the girl next to me.
"YURIPPE?"
"Good. Your awake. C'mon we gotta get going, or we'll both die!" she said and grabbed me by the wrist and started pulling me out and down the hall and stairs of the hotel.
Stuff was starting to blow up from behind us, and that made me run on my own.
"What's going on Yurippe? And how did you find me?" I asked, gasping for breath now since I hadn't ran for my life in a long time.
"I'll explain once we get to a safe spot! Until then, keep running!" she said and ran a bit faster while not looking back.
"I wish I knew WHAT we were running from!-WHOA!" I said, just dodging a piece of concrete that was flung toward us. We were running down the street now. I wonder why no one else is awake yet?...
"It's probably the devil himself!" answered Yurippe.
"WHAT?" I yelled and looked behind us.
Now I don't know what the devil looks like...but I'm pretty sure he looks something like what I saw.
The darkest black scaly skin, and the bloodiest red eyes. Any hair that was on that thing looked like you could jump in and never be seen again. It has large thorns on it's head, fingers, and feet. Fire was coming from his nose and pitch black smoke from his mouth. All the smoke had made the sky as dark as it probably ever would've been.
"Whoa!" I said in awe. The "devil" was only like 2 miles away from us. He took looong footsteps that left footprints everywhere he was. He was a GIANT!
"Yeah, this is pretty intense. We need to get out of view before it trys to grab us or something!" said Yurippe was was looking around for a good hiding place.
"Hide? Don't you have a gun?"
"No. That was in the afterlife 3 years ago, idiot!" was her reply
"Oh right..." I said feeling a bit stupid.
We kept running and running, we both looked very tired by now.
Suddenly as we were passing by a dump, we were pulled inside!
"Wha-! OUCH THAT HURTS!" I yelled at the person who pulled us roughly into the trash. I couldn't tell who it was though.
"Ow!...Huh? Chaa?" said Yurippe, who somehow got pulled on top of me. If Noda saw this he would freak.
Haha! I miss those days...
Great, now I sound like a grandpa.
"Wait, Chaa? Where?" I asked. I couldn't see much since Yurippe was on top of me.
"Right there you idiot-!" she said looking down at me, then her cheeks turned pink as she realized why I couldn't see. Now we were only about an inch away from our noses touching.
"Yurippe, I obviously can't see a thing from down here." I said bluntly.
She was silent for a minute, and then she punched me.
"Idiot." she growled and got off and went to the right.
"Hahaha! You guys are as funny together as you used to be!" said a voice that I also remembered.
And I quite agree with him.
I got up and looked behind me and saw an old face. It was Chaa!
"Chaa! I didn't know you lived at a dump!" I said sarcastically.
"Haha, no I'm just here for hiding...and waiting..." he replied, his arms crossed and himself settled on a broken old couch.
"For what?" asked Yurippe.
"Not what, who. I was waiting for any SSS members to show up. I've already found three. Two of them I sent somewhere else along with some weapons a bullets." explained Chaa.
"Who were they?" I asked, standing fully up now.
"Otonashi and Kanade, I sent those two together into my new hide out, and then Noda, and he said he wanted to help me grab anymore members that came along." he answered.
That's our Noda alright.
"Huh? Noda-kun is here too?" asked Yurippe.
"Why yes, he is. He grabbed and flung you two to my feet! Haha!" said Chaa with a hearty laugh.
Me and Yurippe both looked behind us slowly and saw Noda standing right behind us.
"Uh oh..." I mumbled. He looked pissed off...AT ME. I know this because he was glaring at me.
"Noda-kun!" said Yurippe while taking his hand, "It's good to see you again!" she smiled kindly, making Noda go instantly cherry red.
"N-nice t-to see you again t-too, Yurippe!" he said, quickly getting over his anger at me.
"Sooo..." I said and looked back at Chaa.
"Yes?" he asked.
"How are SSS members that can't move...going to be safe?" I asked.
"They won't. Unless we find them on our own...I don't think we can get them if we just sit around." he explained.
I was stunned and silent.
"Is there a certain someone that you want safe?" he asked.
I gave no answer.
"If you know where they are, I suggest to go and get them before it's too late, Hinata." he said and then sighed after a minute I still hadn't responded.
"So you don't know where they are?" he asked. This time I shook my head, while giving a look of sadness.
"It might already be...too late..." I said in almost a whisper.
"I'm sorry, Hinata...but there's nothing we can do." said Chaa and got up.
The devil thing was getting closer, Chaa gave me and Yurippe both weapons, plus bullets, and then he took me and Yurippe to a man hole.
"Go down here and then you'll find Otonashi and Kanade." he said and took the lid off of the man hole.
Just is the smallest sound that would've never been heard...
I heard a scream.
It was a girl...
Could it be?...
"What was that scream?" asked Yurippe looking around. It must have been louder then I thought.
"I don't...know...it sounded like..." I said slowly and looked around. It was coming from a house that was very close to the devils feet, which was only a little ways away.
"Yurippe...should we check it out?" I asked and looked at her, I think I had a worried expression on because once she looked at me to give an answer, she pauses while staring at me.
"...Fine. Let's go, Hinata-kun." she said finally and we both left for the house.
On the way I saw a base ball on the ground and I picked it up, then threw it at the front window of the house, just in case...
"What was THATfor?" asked Yurippe as we ran for the house.
"Longstory Yurippe. I'll tell ya later!" I said and ran on ahead. Yurippe was still tired from running so much last time.
I got into the house somehow and landed hard onto the ground.
"Owww..." I groaned.
"Wh-who's there?" asked a voice that I now recognized.
I looked up quickly and saw a cute girl, with pink long hair and pretty pink eyes.
It was...
"YUI?" I said, shocked that I really found her.
"Huh?..." she said and squinted her eyes a bit to see better.
"SEMPAI?" said Yui, also shocked now that she knew who I was.
"Yeah! It's me!"
"It took you long enough!" she complained
"Haha, we'll talk about that later. In te mean time, we gotta get outta here!" I said and got up and ran to her side.
"But I can't move or anything-!" she protested and then I picked her up and carried her like she was a princess.
"Don't worry, I'll carry you." I said charmingly enough to get her to blush.
"HURRY UP IN THERE HINATA-KUN!" yelled Yurippe from outside, ruining our moment. I don't think she could see in through the window though since it was so dark.
"I'M COMING! JEEZ!" I yelled back then looked back to Yui. "Hold on tight, OK?"
"Sempai."
"Call me Hinata."
"Fine. Hinata-sempai."
"Yes?"
"I can't grip, hold on, you get it?"
"OH RIGHT. Sorry..."
And then I left out the window and began running for my life with Yurippe again for the third time. I gripped tightly to Yui so she wouldn't fall out of my arms.
After dodging a lot of things thrown at us, we finally made it back and went down the man hole.
"EEEEWWWW! It's stinky down here!" yelled Yui who, probably at this moment, REALLY wanted to plug her nose.
"Yeah it is..." I said, starting to cough a little.
"Hinata? Yui?"
said a voice from not too far away.
"It sounds like them..." said another voice.
"Yeah it does...but how would Yui get here if she's paralyzed?" wondered out loud the first voice again.
"Otonashi? Kanade too?" asked Yurippe and then we found ourselvesin a lit area with Otonashi and Kanade sitting down on a pipe.
"Eh? Yurippe too?" said Otonashi. Kanade ran over to Yurippe and gave her a hug.
"Uh..yeah...good to see you too.." said Yurippe while hugging Kanade back.
"Ah...so Hinata is carrying Yui..." said Otonashi now looking at me carrying the little girl in pajamas.
Well actually we're ALL in our pajamas. This is SO funny, you should've seen Noda's!
Once I laid Yui down I sat next to her while holding her hand. Then we all told our stories about what we started doing once we had gotten out of the afterlife 3 years ago.
"YOU LOOKED FOR YUI FOR 3 YEARS, HINATA?" yelled Otonashi.
"That's mean Otonashi...your making it sound like I'm crazy!" I said with a funny pout.
"Yeah but...I would think you'd find her sooner then that..."
"DO YOU KNOW HOW MANY WINDOWS I BROKE EVERYDAY?"
"OK OK...never mind." said Otonashi backing down. I bet I looked like a mad man now.
Yuibluntly said she laid in bed watching a lot of TV for 3 years. Yuri said she got a job at a book store and saved up for a very cool gun. Now she's just saving up for it's very cool bullets. Look at who's crazy, Otonashi.
Otonashi said he finished collage and, after finding her, started dating Kanade. Kanade only said she spent 3 good years with Yuzuru.
"Yuzuru?"
"That's his first name, not his last which is Otonashi." she replied.
"Oh...OK."
And so we sat down there for awhile, just talking.
Third one!
This is titled "No Climax, No Point, Not Even A Plot"
Another fan-fiction about YuixHinata. A few big paragraphs but a brilliant read overall, writing style is similiar to the first fiction. TLDR: Hinata and Yui intend to sleep in the SSS homeroom to escape Tenshi for the night, neither of them know they are going there however. Original link
Another fan-fiction about YuixHinata. A few big paragraphs but a brilliant read overall, writing style is similiar to the first fiction. TLDR: Hinata and Yui intend to sleep in the SSS homeroom to escape Tenshi for the night, neither of them know they are going there however. Original link
Spoiler
DISCLAIMER: I do not own Angel Beats... It'd be nice though! XD
Ditching classes to keep from disappearing sounded like an easy enough thing to do, but as any member of the Afterlife Battlefront knew, it was actually a lot harder than it sounded. Goofing off outside of a classroom wasn't enough, not here. Even though Tenshi obeyed certain rules of engagement, she could still be incredibly persistent about getting them to do as they were supposed to. In addition, with her incredible strength, she was more than capable of grabbing any of them and dragging them kicking and screaming to class... which she actually had a few times. Thus, whenever an SSS member felt like an afternoon nap, it was actually a little trickier than it initially sounded to get a good spot. Unfortunately for them, Tenshi was a notoriously fast learner, and within the span of approximately a month, the libraries, the dorms, and the rooftops became danger zones to take naps at. As a result, would-be nappers had to think up different places to go to get their snoozes in.
It was on just such a day that Yui was wandering through the halls of the faculty building. She covered up a particularly big yawn with her hand, sleepily rubbing away the droplets that had been squeezed out of the corners of her eyes from the action. Last night, she'd hit upon an inspiration for a song she'd been trying to write and had gotten so excited that she'd stayed up all night writing down the lyrics and the notes, occasionally strumming them on her guitar to see how they sounded. The song was mostly finished, though still lacking a title... she was leaning towards "Little Braver", but she thought it might be wise to sleep on it.
Seeing how the sun had come up by then, sleeping on it was exactly something Yui had not done. And with her sudden burst of inspiration floating away, and taking all of her usually overflowing energy with it, she was in dire need of some shuteye. Even in her tired state, she had at least been able to think of a great place for a nap: the SSS headquarters. At the very least, it was a safe zone, seeing how Tenshi never came to bother them there. Most likely, it would be a bit noisy, but at this moment, Yui felt like she could probably sleep through World War 3 happening right outside her window. Mentally patting herself on the back for her genius, she continued her trot to the familiar doors of the SSS headquarters.
Admittedly, it was a little unsettling for the headquarters to be so quiet, remaining so even when she finally got to the double doors. She was used to there always being at least some kind of activity in there, whether it was the SSS planning out another operation, Iwasawa-san playing a little bit of the latest GirlDeMo song for Yuri's approval (an event that sadly never happened anymore), or just the members goofing off inside. At the very least, the cute puppy toys that Shiina was so fond of would usually be barking in the corner the ninja often occupied. Today, there was nothing. She reminded herself that everyone was around the school, so naturally no one was here. That calmed Yui's unease some, and besides, she had more important things to worry about, like curling up on the comfy sofa and sleeping. It would also be wonderful to sleep knowing that she was in no danger of waking up to Tenshi staring down at her with her typical deadpan glare and ordering her to class (the last time that had happened was when Yui had overslept and Tenshi had gotten into her dorm room... if she was still alive, she would have said that had taken a few years off her life).
Given how much she'd been looking forward to her nap, it explained her surprise and dismay to see that the sofa was already taken by a body lying full-length on her beloved destination. The blue hair tipped her off on the identity, since she'd yet to see anyone else with hair like Hinata-senpai's. She tiptoed in his direction, cautiously observing him.
Is he dead?
Just as soon as that thought materialized, she saw his chest rising and falling with slow, even breaths. Okay, so he was napping. For a reason she could not place, Yui felt a sense of relief at this. She walked over to his side and squatted, placing her hands on her knees as she observed him. She blinked once, still gazing at him and silently studying his face. Thoughts flitted through her head as she did.
I think Yurippe-senpai had a black marker in her desk somewhere... This would be a perfect opportunity, and besides, it'd be his fault for letting his guard down...
Just as more such malicious thoughts were beginning to stew in her head, he shivered. Yui blinked again. Was he cold? Well... now that she thought about it... it was a tad chilly in here. He definitely picked a hell of a place for an afternoon nap, Yui thought. And it was pretty dumb of him to take off his uniform jacket and fling it on the coffee table...
Well, she definitely wasn't about to go roam around for a napping place elsewhere, she thought with a mental huff. Who knew where else Tenshi patrolled? There were always the chairs opposite the couch but they'd never been too comfy to sit in for anything besides... well... sitting. He was too heavy for her to move (not for the first time, she wished she was absurdly strong like Tenshi... if she were, this would hardly have been a problem). And... besides, she didn't really want to leave him out in the cold... and taking his jacket for herself didn't exactly promise to be warm enough (she'd never given enough credit to how body heat tended to make this room so warm usually).
After taking a moment to think, she decided on what to do. Besides, this was still her damn idea and she wasn't about to let Hinata-senpai spoil her brilliant plan so easily... Gently shoving him more into the couch, she laid down beside him, her arms wrapped around him to keep from falling off, and also to share their body heat. She ignored the fact that she was lightly blushing and her heart was pounding, and decided to close her eyes to sleep...
...At least, that had been the plan. Hinata had chosen that moment to wake up. He looked down at her groggily. "What the hell are you doing?" he mumbled sourly.
Yui opened her eyes to glare sleepily at him herself. "I do something nice for you and this is how you repay me? I could've just let you freeze, y'know."
"I don't recall ever asking you to do anything for me," he groused. Still, despite his whining, Hinata had to admit that Yui felt kind of nice. He wasn't about to admit it in front of her, but it had been pretty chilly, and the sudden warmth he'd felt had awoken him. And besides... it wasn't like he entirely minded that it was Yui...
He cut off that train of thought immediately. "Whatever. Anyway, you're hogging too much room," Hinata complained. The back cushions were comfy, but not when they were practically engulfing him.
"You're hogging too much room. I'm practically falling off here."
Hinata looked over, noticing that she really was. Even though she had such a small body, the couch was hardly big enough for the both of them... especially not if they wanted to be comfortable. Grumbling under his breath, he wrapped his arms around her and rolled over so that she was lying on top of him and he was beneath her on his back. Yui flushed at their intimate positioning, and even Hinata felt his face getting hot, but he disguised it as best as he could by scowling sleepily at her, to which she responded in kind.
"Wh-What are you doing? Pervert!"
"Don't call me a pervert, you retarded girl," Hinata growled. "And this is the only way we're both gonna be on this damn couch, so just shut up. That, or the door is right there."
"Hmph, this is the last time I do anything nice for you."
Even though she had spoken her words unkindly, she was already settling against him, her head resting next to his. She swallowed hard at feeling his heart beating, and she wondered if he could hear hers beating at an accelerated rate as well. Still... he was so warm. And even though his body was pretty hard, she still felt comfortable. However, Yui wasn't about to let that show, so she managed to spit out a soft, "Idiot" before closing her eyes.
"You're the idiot," he mumbled drowsily, throwing his uniform jacket over her back and wrapping his arms around her. No need for her to fall off, after all. He'd never hear the end of her damn whining, and she'd probably kick him too (damn her boots). He focused on that so that way he wouldn't have to think about how she felt really nice against him, and that he liked the smell of her hair. She used one with a very sweet fragrance, and he always had preferred the scent from the fruitier shampoos to the other kinds, after all.
"You better not grope me in your sleep, pervert."
"You've nothing to worry about, since it's not like you have anything to grope to begin with."
"Hmph. If you can't feel my absolutely exquisite body even at this range, then you're hopeless. Not that I want you touching me anyway."
Hinata decided he would let this go, seeing how he actually could feel what she was talking about right now, and he decided that he was far too tired to do a damn thing. For Yui's part, she vaguely supposed that if she were conscious enough to actually feel embarrassed at their close proximity, she would have turned fire truck red, but at this point, Hinata-senpai touching her goodies was last on her list of worries.
Ignoring the niggling thought in her head that she wouldn't entirely mind if he actually did touch her goodies was made much easier by the fact that her whole body was currently screaming for sleep.
Adjusting his hold on her so that it was more comfortable (for him of course, he tried to remind himself) he grumbled, "Shut up and sleep, brat."
"I will, thank you very much. Stupid senpai."
One headbutt, he supposed, wasn't going to hurt anyone. And so with one last rap against her head with his own, to which she responded with only a short yelp of complaint and brief grumbling, they closed their eyes to sleep.
End
Boredom at work has gotta be one of the best sources of writing material in the world. XP
Y'know, I'm a big fan of the Yui x Hinata pairing, but it irritated me that I couldn't really think of anything to write for them! First piece I've written for them that actually went anywhere, to be honest... And yes, it really was meant to have absolutely no point whatsoever. Think of it more as like a snapshot moment, if you will. I chalk up the fact that I toned down much of Yui's hyperactivity to the fact that she's sleepy. XD Maybe I can hopefully make a piece in the future that can feature some of that, since Yui's energy was one of the selling points of her character to me. Plus I always loved the dynamic between Yui and Hinata. I was rooting for them since episode 4, to be honest! XD Would've been nice if we got to see some more moments between them though...
Anyways, if you've made it this far, please leave a review. Constructive criticism is always great, flames will be used to warm myself up on the chilly nights that have been rolling in. 'Til next time!
Ditching classes to keep from disappearing sounded like an easy enough thing to do, but as any member of the Afterlife Battlefront knew, it was actually a lot harder than it sounded. Goofing off outside of a classroom wasn't enough, not here. Even though Tenshi obeyed certain rules of engagement, she could still be incredibly persistent about getting them to do as they were supposed to. In addition, with her incredible strength, she was more than capable of grabbing any of them and dragging them kicking and screaming to class... which she actually had a few times. Thus, whenever an SSS member felt like an afternoon nap, it was actually a little trickier than it initially sounded to get a good spot. Unfortunately for them, Tenshi was a notoriously fast learner, and within the span of approximately a month, the libraries, the dorms, and the rooftops became danger zones to take naps at. As a result, would-be nappers had to think up different places to go to get their snoozes in.
It was on just such a day that Yui was wandering through the halls of the faculty building. She covered up a particularly big yawn with her hand, sleepily rubbing away the droplets that had been squeezed out of the corners of her eyes from the action. Last night, she'd hit upon an inspiration for a song she'd been trying to write and had gotten so excited that she'd stayed up all night writing down the lyrics and the notes, occasionally strumming them on her guitar to see how they sounded. The song was mostly finished, though still lacking a title... she was leaning towards "Little Braver", but she thought it might be wise to sleep on it.
Seeing how the sun had come up by then, sleeping on it was exactly something Yui had not done. And with her sudden burst of inspiration floating away, and taking all of her usually overflowing energy with it, she was in dire need of some shuteye. Even in her tired state, she had at least been able to think of a great place for a nap: the SSS headquarters. At the very least, it was a safe zone, seeing how Tenshi never came to bother them there. Most likely, it would be a bit noisy, but at this moment, Yui felt like she could probably sleep through World War 3 happening right outside her window. Mentally patting herself on the back for her genius, she continued her trot to the familiar doors of the SSS headquarters.
Admittedly, it was a little unsettling for the headquarters to be so quiet, remaining so even when she finally got to the double doors. She was used to there always being at least some kind of activity in there, whether it was the SSS planning out another operation, Iwasawa-san playing a little bit of the latest GirlDeMo song for Yuri's approval (an event that sadly never happened anymore), or just the members goofing off inside. At the very least, the cute puppy toys that Shiina was so fond of would usually be barking in the corner the ninja often occupied. Today, there was nothing. She reminded herself that everyone was around the school, so naturally no one was here. That calmed Yui's unease some, and besides, she had more important things to worry about, like curling up on the comfy sofa and sleeping. It would also be wonderful to sleep knowing that she was in no danger of waking up to Tenshi staring down at her with her typical deadpan glare and ordering her to class (the last time that had happened was when Yui had overslept and Tenshi had gotten into her dorm room... if she was still alive, she would have said that had taken a few years off her life).
Given how much she'd been looking forward to her nap, it explained her surprise and dismay to see that the sofa was already taken by a body lying full-length on her beloved destination. The blue hair tipped her off on the identity, since she'd yet to see anyone else with hair like Hinata-senpai's. She tiptoed in his direction, cautiously observing him.
Is he dead?
Just as soon as that thought materialized, she saw his chest rising and falling with slow, even breaths. Okay, so he was napping. For a reason she could not place, Yui felt a sense of relief at this. She walked over to his side and squatted, placing her hands on her knees as she observed him. She blinked once, still gazing at him and silently studying his face. Thoughts flitted through her head as she did.
I think Yurippe-senpai had a black marker in her desk somewhere... This would be a perfect opportunity, and besides, it'd be his fault for letting his guard down...
Just as more such malicious thoughts were beginning to stew in her head, he shivered. Yui blinked again. Was he cold? Well... now that she thought about it... it was a tad chilly in here. He definitely picked a hell of a place for an afternoon nap, Yui thought. And it was pretty dumb of him to take off his uniform jacket and fling it on the coffee table...
Well, she definitely wasn't about to go roam around for a napping place elsewhere, she thought with a mental huff. Who knew where else Tenshi patrolled? There were always the chairs opposite the couch but they'd never been too comfy to sit in for anything besides... well... sitting. He was too heavy for her to move (not for the first time, she wished she was absurdly strong like Tenshi... if she were, this would hardly have been a problem). And... besides, she didn't really want to leave him out in the cold... and taking his jacket for herself didn't exactly promise to be warm enough (she'd never given enough credit to how body heat tended to make this room so warm usually).
After taking a moment to think, she decided on what to do. Besides, this was still her damn idea and she wasn't about to let Hinata-senpai spoil her brilliant plan so easily... Gently shoving him more into the couch, she laid down beside him, her arms wrapped around him to keep from falling off, and also to share their body heat. She ignored the fact that she was lightly blushing and her heart was pounding, and decided to close her eyes to sleep...
...At least, that had been the plan. Hinata had chosen that moment to wake up. He looked down at her groggily. "What the hell are you doing?" he mumbled sourly.
Yui opened her eyes to glare sleepily at him herself. "I do something nice for you and this is how you repay me? I could've just let you freeze, y'know."
"I don't recall ever asking you to do anything for me," he groused. Still, despite his whining, Hinata had to admit that Yui felt kind of nice. He wasn't about to admit it in front of her, but it had been pretty chilly, and the sudden warmth he'd felt had awoken him. And besides... it wasn't like he entirely minded that it was Yui...
He cut off that train of thought immediately. "Whatever. Anyway, you're hogging too much room," Hinata complained. The back cushions were comfy, but not when they were practically engulfing him.
"You're hogging too much room. I'm practically falling off here."
Hinata looked over, noticing that she really was. Even though she had such a small body, the couch was hardly big enough for the both of them... especially not if they wanted to be comfortable. Grumbling under his breath, he wrapped his arms around her and rolled over so that she was lying on top of him and he was beneath her on his back. Yui flushed at their intimate positioning, and even Hinata felt his face getting hot, but he disguised it as best as he could by scowling sleepily at her, to which she responded in kind.
"Wh-What are you doing? Pervert!"
"Don't call me a pervert, you retarded girl," Hinata growled. "And this is the only way we're both gonna be on this damn couch, so just shut up. That, or the door is right there."
"Hmph, this is the last time I do anything nice for you."
Even though she had spoken her words unkindly, she was already settling against him, her head resting next to his. She swallowed hard at feeling his heart beating, and she wondered if he could hear hers beating at an accelerated rate as well. Still... he was so warm. And even though his body was pretty hard, she still felt comfortable. However, Yui wasn't about to let that show, so she managed to spit out a soft, "Idiot" before closing her eyes.
"You're the idiot," he mumbled drowsily, throwing his uniform jacket over her back and wrapping his arms around her. No need for her to fall off, after all. He'd never hear the end of her damn whining, and she'd probably kick him too (damn her boots). He focused on that so that way he wouldn't have to think about how she felt really nice against him, and that he liked the smell of her hair. She used one with a very sweet fragrance, and he always had preferred the scent from the fruitier shampoos to the other kinds, after all.
"You better not grope me in your sleep, pervert."
"You've nothing to worry about, since it's not like you have anything to grope to begin with."
"Hmph. If you can't feel my absolutely exquisite body even at this range, then you're hopeless. Not that I want you touching me anyway."
Hinata decided he would let this go, seeing how he actually could feel what she was talking about right now, and he decided that he was far too tired to do a damn thing. For Yui's part, she vaguely supposed that if she were conscious enough to actually feel embarrassed at their close proximity, she would have turned fire truck red, but at this point, Hinata-senpai touching her goodies was last on her list of worries.
Ignoring the niggling thought in her head that she wouldn't entirely mind if he actually did touch her goodies was made much easier by the fact that her whole body was currently screaming for sleep.
Adjusting his hold on her so that it was more comfortable (for him of course, he tried to remind himself) he grumbled, "Shut up and sleep, brat."
"I will, thank you very much. Stupid senpai."
One headbutt, he supposed, wasn't going to hurt anyone. And so with one last rap against her head with his own, to which she responded with only a short yelp of complaint and brief grumbling, they closed their eyes to sleep.
End
Boredom at work has gotta be one of the best sources of writing material in the world. XP
Y'know, I'm a big fan of the Yui x Hinata pairing, but it irritated me that I couldn't really think of anything to write for them! First piece I've written for them that actually went anywhere, to be honest... And yes, it really was meant to have absolutely no point whatsoever. Think of it more as like a snapshot moment, if you will. I chalk up the fact that I toned down much of Yui's hyperactivity to the fact that she's sleepy. XD Maybe I can hopefully make a piece in the future that can feature some of that, since Yui's energy was one of the selling points of her character to me. Plus I always loved the dynamic between Yui and Hinata. I was rooting for them since episode 4, to be honest! XD Would've been nice if we got to see some more moments between them though...
Anyways, if you've made it this far, please leave a review. Constructive criticism is always great, flames will be used to warm myself up on the chilly nights that have been rolling in. 'Til next time!
Fourth one!
This is titled "Another Beats! Chapter 1"
A nice fanfiction for the YuixHinata pairing. . Original link.
A nice fanfiction for the YuixHinata pairing. . Original link.
Spoiler
Chapter 001 –Meet–
Hinata's PoV
Hey… Although I am already in this real world I still can remember everything happened in afterlife… and I don't know why. But I still remembering them, the SSS members, those NPCs, Kanade-chan, Otonashi, Yurippe, and…
… Yui. She is the most person I looking for.
I promised her that I will find her. But no matter how much I broke window of someone's house, I still haven't find her… That pink-haired girl with hoodlum temperament and golden voice that able to get attention from those NPCs that time.
Yui is… A Plain girl that I met for the first time as a candidate for GirlDeMo new vocalist after Iwasawa-san disappeared. GirlDeMo itself is a 'decoy' or diversion of the NPCs when SSS on a mission, such as Tornado operation is executed.
And that girl… Successfully made me falling in love into her…
… Lol this is very laughable. I remember the past again.
After school, when not playing baseball with other members of the baseball club, I usual do a part-time job in a cafe. Located not so far from baseball field. Not bad for an addition income. And for some reason, I always imagined that child of the cafe owner is Yui, despite the owner's child obviously is a boy, hahaha.
Saturday, where there's no school or extracurricular activities. As long as no one invites me to hang out, I spent my day off at the cafe.
The cafe is crowded as usual. And I was overwhelmed as usual, too.
"Waiter!" a bespectacled girl who holds a menu book seemed called me.
I went and asked friendy to her as usual, "what can I do, Miss?"
"Oi, Senpai," she whispered me.
"Eh?" I stunned. Who's a girl that called me 'senpai' so suddenly? Is she my junior? But I cannot recognize her.
"Hinata-senpai, you remember me?" the girl took off her glasses. She pointed at herself with her right finger and looked at me meaningfully as she hopeful I could recognized her. But of course I knew her. That long pink hair, and a voice like a hoodlum…
"Y-Yui?" I screamed, can't believing. Doesn't Yui in the real world is a bedridden and paralyzed girl who waited me to break her window? Why does she came and found me when I was working?
"I knew you wouldn't believe if it's me," she said softly.
"W-Why you're not paralyzed?" I asked curiously, sitting down in front of her.
Yui smiled smugly, "Dunno. After reincarnation at that time I felt so healthy like when I was in the afterlife. Then I really found you, senpai!"
"And how you find me here?"
When Yui just going to talk, my boss come. Then I gave my home phone number and ask for her email address. After serving customers as usual, I send Yui an email and asked her to wait on the baseball field near to cafe.
After I done my job, I looking for Yui. She's still waiting. A girl, who wrapped in light of the sun in the afternoon, she wore a casual clothes that really mediocre, but somehow I like to see it. She looks cute wearing any clothes.
I still can see a wide smile on her face. When she saw that I walk to her, she immediately ran to me with happy face. She looks happy after meeting with me. Actually it is not just her. I'm also happy I could find her… Err… Actually she found me.
"Where's your house, Yui? Let me accompany you until you reached your house."
"Eeeh? We're going home already? But I still want to chat with you, senpai."
"Hmm, oke. What if we take a walk at downtown? Until what time you're allowed to go home?" I said.
"I told mom that I will meet senpai today so I've convinced her until she said I could go home with you anytime!" she said excitedly.
"Your mom knows me?"
"Yeah! I always tell her about you! I also always said that you'll marry me!" she screamed, still happy. She then holds my hand and said, "come on, senpai! We're on dating! We can't do that when we're in afterlife, right? Because I disappeared after you confessing your feeling! Hahah!"
I smiled. Ah she's right. In the afterlife what I do is just quarrel with her and when I said that I love her she's then disappeared. I want to spend my time with her… From this day.
"Oh, yes Yui. Let's continue the conversation earlier. How did you know that I worked in a cafe?"
"Actually, I'm not the one who knowing that you're working in the cafe," she said, "Yuri-chansenpai told me."
"Oh…" I smiled and glad hearing Yurippe's name. But…
"EEEHHH?"
Hinata's PoV
Hey… Although I am already in this real world I still can remember everything happened in afterlife… and I don't know why. But I still remembering them, the SSS members, those NPCs, Kanade-chan, Otonashi, Yurippe, and…
… Yui. She is the most person I looking for.
I promised her that I will find her. But no matter how much I broke window of someone's house, I still haven't find her… That pink-haired girl with hoodlum temperament and golden voice that able to get attention from those NPCs that time.
Yui is… A Plain girl that I met for the first time as a candidate for GirlDeMo new vocalist after Iwasawa-san disappeared. GirlDeMo itself is a 'decoy' or diversion of the NPCs when SSS on a mission, such as Tornado operation is executed.
And that girl… Successfully made me falling in love into her…
… Lol this is very laughable. I remember the past again.
After school, when not playing baseball with other members of the baseball club, I usual do a part-time job in a cafe. Located not so far from baseball field. Not bad for an addition income. And for some reason, I always imagined that child of the cafe owner is Yui, despite the owner's child obviously is a boy, hahaha.
Saturday, where there's no school or extracurricular activities. As long as no one invites me to hang out, I spent my day off at the cafe.
The cafe is crowded as usual. And I was overwhelmed as usual, too.
"Waiter!" a bespectacled girl who holds a menu book seemed called me.
I went and asked friendy to her as usual, "what can I do, Miss?"
"Oi, Senpai," she whispered me.
"Eh?" I stunned. Who's a girl that called me 'senpai' so suddenly? Is she my junior? But I cannot recognize her.
"Hinata-senpai, you remember me?" the girl took off her glasses. She pointed at herself with her right finger and looked at me meaningfully as she hopeful I could recognized her. But of course I knew her. That long pink hair, and a voice like a hoodlum…
"Y-Yui?" I screamed, can't believing. Doesn't Yui in the real world is a bedridden and paralyzed girl who waited me to break her window? Why does she came and found me when I was working?
"I knew you wouldn't believe if it's me," she said softly.
"W-Why you're not paralyzed?" I asked curiously, sitting down in front of her.
Yui smiled smugly, "Dunno. After reincarnation at that time I felt so healthy like when I was in the afterlife. Then I really found you, senpai!"
"And how you find me here?"
When Yui just going to talk, my boss come. Then I gave my home phone number and ask for her email address. After serving customers as usual, I send Yui an email and asked her to wait on the baseball field near to cafe.
After I done my job, I looking for Yui. She's still waiting. A girl, who wrapped in light of the sun in the afternoon, she wore a casual clothes that really mediocre, but somehow I like to see it. She looks cute wearing any clothes.
I still can see a wide smile on her face. When she saw that I walk to her, she immediately ran to me with happy face. She looks happy after meeting with me. Actually it is not just her. I'm also happy I could find her… Err… Actually she found me.
"Where's your house, Yui? Let me accompany you until you reached your house."
"Eeeh? We're going home already? But I still want to chat with you, senpai."
"Hmm, oke. What if we take a walk at downtown? Until what time you're allowed to go home?" I said.
"I told mom that I will meet senpai today so I've convinced her until she said I could go home with you anytime!" she said excitedly.
"Your mom knows me?"
"Yeah! I always tell her about you! I also always said that you'll marry me!" she screamed, still happy. She then holds my hand and said, "come on, senpai! We're on dating! We can't do that when we're in afterlife, right? Because I disappeared after you confessing your feeling! Hahah!"
I smiled. Ah she's right. In the afterlife what I do is just quarrel with her and when I said that I love her she's then disappeared. I want to spend my time with her… From this day.
"Oh, yes Yui. Let's continue the conversation earlier. How did you know that I worked in a cafe?"
"Actually, I'm not the one who knowing that you're working in the cafe," she said, "Yuri-chansenpai told me."
"Oh…" I smiled and glad hearing Yurippe's name. But…
"EEEHHH?"
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